Night Mistress

Um...try the House of Night Series by P.C. Cast.

not cool, leaving a cliffhanger like that. your story is really good. your plot and characters are fine. i like story. i hope you put up other piece. pm me ...

what was that vision? was it genna dying? or something? i guess i will have to go to the next chapter and find out.

okay, that's was wired. i thought jasper liked being around her. and what the "i have no right to say that"? is he just saying that or is it for ...

is he only human during the night or what? this ghost thing is confusing. any ways. i like this story and i am go on to the next chapter.

I get the names from a baby names website because i can't think of cool names on my own. Aidan was landon's old name before i change it to Landon. ...

this was a good story. i love it. but of course i love historical romance. i look forward to reading more of your historical romance.

interesting. that's all i can really say. but i get the felling that jasper and genna are going to fall in love or something? i don't know why, i am ...

interesting. so her friends don't believe she is moving, but she moves. people are already calling her a nerd and then... there damien. i must say that you have my ...

Jas, the first chapter seem pretty good. so the father wante to move to beaufort manor. sounds interesting. i will have to check out the other chapters the plot seems ...

omsvmars22: thanks, I will see if I can more to it. I will pm you when I post chapter 5.

andrew : I only add the book in for a little humor. nothing more, nothing less.

you could practically feel the emotion coming off of that. good job! it was a little slow, but it pick up has to made your way through it. it's really ...

I have add some more stuff to this chapter, so check it out and telling me what you think.

i have to say that i am interested in your story, so post another piece soon and when you do, make sure you pm me.